I don't disagree with you but I think you are jumping around a lot and your idea...

pmorici on Dec 27, 2010 | parent | context | favorite | on: Why the poor are poor

I don't disagree with you but I think you are jumping around a lot and your ideas don't flow well as presented. This reads more like an outline or rough draft than a finished piece IMO.

alnayyir on Dec 27, 2010 [–]

I'll do some more editing next time.